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WELCOME TO THE FAMILY! WE ARE GLAD TO HAVE YOU HERE!
Thank you for your support, it is greatly appreciated!
R.I.P. James Owen Sullivan a.k.a. The Rev 1981-2009

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    Friends to the end

    Justin
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    Post  Justin 5/15/2011, 3:19 pm

    I am your friend
    From now until the end
    From now till the day I die
    I'll be there when you cry
    Your secrets I will hide
    I'm here when u need to confide
    I'll try not to Make you mad
    And cheer you up when your sad
    I'll try my best to make you laugh
    It will be like your my other half
    I hope that I can count on you Too
    To always be my friend so true
    If all goes to plan
    I'll be your biggest fan
    And from now until the end
    We will always be friends
    the mice endure
    the mice endure


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    Post  the mice endure 5/16/2011, 3:57 pm

    I love this.


    Just one thing to note. Your use of the word 'your'.

    This is why I hate the English language. I think you meant to use 'you're' as in 'you are'.

    A way to help tell the difference is say it out loud using the full two words Eg.

    'and cheer you up when you are sad'. [and cheer you up when you're sad]

    Whereas in the first line you use 'your' correctly. [Because, 'I am 'you are' friend', doesn't make sense].

    I hope that helps.

    Otherwise, I really enjoyed this Smile

    A good ode to friendship.

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