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    Post  Cwhitt 2/28/2011, 8:11 am

    anDy wrote:
    I'm not hating, I'm just being an adviser
    to make an aspiring writer even wiser
    Nothing I said should be seen as mean, only revealing
    that not everything is made better through sugar coating
    My message has been lost in the midst of conversion
    Like how Jackson, a kid at heart,'s accused of perversion
    I don't despise any, everybody has their dreams
    and my eyes are always open because world's of lucid themes
    You gotta live what you desire, dont stand back and admire
    you gotta fuel your own fire to make the balloon rise higher
    The skies are anyone's that strive to conquer empires
    and not those who tire out the concept of struggling fighters
    We all struggle, sadly some more than others
    And I wish I could save the sufferers of their disease and their hunger
    But I can't, none of us have that kind of power
    but its up to us to shower our gift during untimely hours
    We can only use what we have to define our names
    We can't only worry about the fallen or we'll do the same
    So see these words as advice and not not as conviction
    talents only grow with constructive criticism
    There is good in the world but also the evil
    It's all about fixing your lens on how you see people
    If you allow yourself to be caught in the vineyard then you'll fall
    does being angry at people make anything better at all?
    There's your history lesson on how seeing evil's a submission
    to weakening yourself instead of thriving for ambition
    I am lucky, as are you, to be so healthy
    when so many millions strive to become wealthy
    Life's more than money it's about using what you've got
    but we are so far gone we'll kill each other in parking lots
    Blood's been shed and it's on the snow by showin us
    Hatred's looking through our curtains, we just gotta sew them shut

    Thank you, now theres a flow I can relate to.
    Your words truly empower me, make me want to make a sweet melody,
    make a little harmony with some words and a beat,
    get a throng of people in the street,
    and all of them are there to hear what we have to say,
    for some people were a ray of light,
    were the reason they wont give up the fight.
    I want to help people see that the world is their oyster,
    that its no longer time to loiter at the drug store,
    help the poor off the curbs, show em with my words,
    that this situation we've been thrown in isnt all bad,
    theres so many reasons to get glad,
    help someone out of sad times,
    take the knife from their hand,
    help them withstand whatever troubles they're going through,
    help em realign their vision instead of lookin at the world askew.
    Andy, you see, I'm in it to make the world a better place,
    help to eradicate any trace of oppression,
    its an obsession of mine, but it doesn't make me divine,
    it doesn't make me anything special.
    These sentences that I write with my pencil come from my heart,
    I want to contribute to the art any way that I can,
    whether i'm a fan or a man on the front page.
    deceit
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    Post  deceit 3/1/2011, 2:07 am

    No one caught what I posted. Lameeeeeeee.
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    Post  Justin 3/1/2011, 4:04 am

    deceit wrote:No one caught what I posted. Lameeeeeeee.

    I did whitey! :-) I'll post some sort of rebuttal to all this crap tonight.
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    Post  anDy 3/1/2011, 6:22 am

    Cwhitt wrote:
    anDy wrote:
    I'm not hating, I'm just being an adviser
    to make an aspiring writer even wiser
    Nothing I said should be seen as mean, only revealing
    that not everything is made better through sugar coating
    My message has been lost in the midst of conversion
    Like how Jackson, a kid at heart,'s accused of perversion
    I don't despise any, everybody has their dreams
    and my eyes are always open because world's of lucid themes
    You gotta live what you desire, dont stand back and admire
    you gotta fuel your own fire to make the balloon rise higher
    The skies are anyone's that strive to conquer empires
    and not those who tire out the concept of struggling fighters
    We all struggle, sadly some more than others
    And I wish I could save the sufferers of their disease and their hunger
    But I can't, none of us have that kind of power
    but its up to us to shower our gift during untimely hours
    We can only use what we have to define our names
    We can't only worry about the fallen or we'll do the same
    So see these words as advice and not not as conviction
    talents only grow with constructive criticism
    There is good in the world but also the evil
    It's all about fixing your lens on how you see people
    If you allow yourself to be caught in the vineyard then you'll fall
    does being angry at people make anything better at all?
    There's your history lesson on how seeing evil's a submission
    to weakening yourself instead of thriving for ambition
    I am lucky, as are you, to be so healthy
    when so many millions strive to become wealthy
    Life's more than money it's about using what you've got
    but we are so far gone we'll kill each other in parking lots
    Blood's been shed and it's on the snow by showin us
    Hatred's looking through our curtains, we just gotta sew them shut

    Thank you, now theres a flow I can relate to.
    Your words truly empower me, make me want to make a sweet melody,
    make a little harmony with some words and a beat,
    get a throng of people in the street,
    and all of them are there to hear what we have to say,
    for some people were a ray of light,
    were the reason they wont give up the fight.
    I want to help people see that the world is their oyster,
    that its no longer time to loiter at the drug store,
    help the poor off the curbs, show em with my words,
    that this situation we've been thrown in isnt all bad,
    theres so many reasons to get glad,
    help someone out of sad times,
    take the knife from their hand,
    help them withstand whatever troubles they're going through,
    help em realign their vision instead of lookin at the world askew.
    Andy, you see, I'm in it to make the world a better place,
    help to eradicate any trace of oppression,
    its an obsession of mine, but it doesn't make me divine,
    it doesn't make me anything special.
    These sentences that I write with my pencil come from my heart,
    I want to contribute to the art any way that I can,
    whether i'm a fan or a man on the front page.


    Being a professional of poetry and prose
    there are pros and cons with rap concepts that impose
    We're busy chowin down on violent sexual hymns
    when we've forgotten about a tribe and Rakim.
    Cwhitt, I think it's awfully nice
    to see someone write with wit instead of vice
    Instead of going long again, I'll keep this short and sweet
    when it comes to life, you are what you eat
    So absorb the positivity like a happy sponge
    even if your neighbor's a star, in the end you're the one
    who will emerge from the waters like sunken treasure
    who'll go to such lengths that the Titanic can't measure
    Pressure hurts the head the deeper we go
    and if our heads are too high we'll suffer egos
    patience comes with pathos and worth with humility
    Your invincibility's invisible if you can't work your vicinity
    Josh
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    Post  Josh 3/1/2011, 9:50 am

    deceit wrote:No one caught what I posted. Lameeeeeeee.


    I did! I didnt quote you though, my bad
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    Post  Josh 3/3/2011, 12:32 pm

    To anyone out there who dares to veto this
    It's your choice if your willing the risk
    Fake rappers are like cheating whores
    Makin up lies so you boot them out the door
    It pisses me off when the act like a prick
    Cause all they wanna do is suck some major dick
    Quick, run away, return to fight another day.
    You phonies copy and paste your lyrics
    And then expect people to fear it
    You want them to hear it, but they can't
    Not even if you decide to go on a rant
    I'll cut you open with the Excalibur
    Make a coat out of your own fur
    This life your living is a blur
    You better think fast, somethings gotta occur
    One day it might be to late
    And you'll get your food force feed from the plate
    Man doesn't if feel great?
    All of your shits second rate, mate.

    Mhmm. I just felt like spittin something:P
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    Post  popo 3/3/2011, 2:25 pm

    deceit wrote:
    I'm a white boy but my neck is red
    I put miracle whip on my wonder bread
    My face is pail, nah I've never been in Jail
    Me and Buffy spend every winter in Vail
    How many bitches have i slapped? Zero, uh
    And Martha Stuart happens to be my hero
    I grew up in a farm and i was born with no rhythm
    Dr. Phil is my uncle and I like to hang with him
    I can't dance, I wear khaki pants
    My middle name is Lance, my grandma is from France
    So maybe I'm whack
    Cause my skin ain't black
    But you can't talk smack
    Because whitey just struck back



    The best one out of the entire scary movie series.

    real talk
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    Post  Justin 5/10/2011, 4:08 pm

    I think it's time to start this back up. ANDY COME OUT AND PLAAAAAYYYYYY! lol
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    Post  CiaraCobb 5/10/2011, 5:42 pm

    I couldn't agree more!
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    Post  Josh 5/11/2011, 4:35 pm

    Good lord, I thought everyone here died or something, everyone just stopped replying. Yeah seriously though, lets get this shit ablaze again!
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    Post  Justin 5/13/2011, 10:40 am

    So Its been awhile but I didn't get rusty
    just a calm before the storm and now its getting gusty
    You guys I admit are decent and rhyme pretty well
    But it's time for the ref to ring the bell
    cause all my rhymes are like a lethal blow
    Your rhymes are amateur mine are pro
    Andy doesn't even wanna show up no more
    he must think getting out rhymed on DBC is a chore
    The only other one is this dude named josh
    you act real sly but your rhymes get squashed
    by who you ask? well I'm the king
    So on your knees peasant and kiss the ring
    I'm not trying to make anyone sad
    I could do worse, so you should be glad
    So who will step up the plate next
    maybe Andy will come if he ain't busy having hand sex



    Laughing

    (remember this is all in good fun, so no hard feelings. lol)
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    Post  Josh 5/15/2011, 9:05 am

    Justin wrote:So Its been awhile but I didn't get rusty
    just a calm before the storm and now its getting gusty
    You guys I admit are decent and rhyme pretty well
    But it's time for the ref to ring the bell
    cause all my rhymes are like a lethal blow
    Your rhymes are amateur mine are pro
    Andy doesn't even wanna show up no more
    he must think getting out rhymed on DBC is a chore
    The only other one is this dude named josh
    you act real sly but your rhymes get squashed
    by who you ask? well I'm the king
    So on your knees peasant and kiss the ring
    I'm not trying to make anyone sad
    I could do worse, so you should be glad
    So who will step up the plate next
    maybe Andy will come if he ain't busy having hand sex



    Laughing

    (remember this is all in good fun, so no hard feelings. lol)


    Damn Justin when will you learn,
    the shit you spit doesn't even relate to a burn,
    I like the failed attempt about being the king,
    "Get on your knees peasant and kiss the ring",
    you probably bought that shit out of a candy machine,
    Hell, it probably took you all night to write your rap,
    And you were all hyped up on caffeine and other smack,
    Nobody cares if you're back,
    You even concider yourself the ref, dude whats your career,
    You sound like a drunk hillbilly who can't decide which beer,
    Your lyrics are so shitty that you yanked them out of your rear,
    I don't even need to act sly, what, do you think i'm an undercover spy?
    The only way i'm gunna die is if you pry my pride from my cold hands,
    Sorry I made a contradiction, your whole life is based upon fiction,
    Don't even attempt to make a prediction, your to low of condition,
    There, I think i've crushed you enough, this sand box is getting way to rough,
    So there you have it Justin, I called out your bluff.

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